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Friday 23 June 2017

Explanation Temple

 Last term we did our Explanation temple about: Who my role model Is and why.This Is It.I enjoyed writing this because i love my parents


Why is my parents  my role model
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.
T
Title - What you will be explaining

I
Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I
Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C
Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
Mum and Dad are my role models.
Introduction

I am writing about my mum and dad because they made me the person I am. I am writing this to them because I love them.



Information
1st element
My dad Wayne

I look up to my dad because he is always looking for things to do around the house.He is my peace of my puzzle and he only gets angry when we fight.He always does things like fixing the car when it's broken.My dad always takes me with him to work some days and he gives me money because i work with him.I love my dad and he loves me to.



Information
2nd element
My mum Arini

I look up to my mum because she encourages me to always do good in the future and follow in her footsteps..She never gives up no matter what even when she’s sick she still does it. I love my mum and she is the last peace to my puzzle.


Information
3rd element
My parents Arini and Wayne

I look up to my parents because they both have faith in me and always tells me to push past the limit.They are as lovely as a monkey. They are everything to me .They are the best parents you could ever ask for.


Conclusion
My parents are my all and they are the last piece of my puzzle i love my         parents with all my heart

                         

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